A crystal wing
Flutters for its shattered partner,
Six legs limping across a perfect surface; from above,
A pitying eye
Looks down, wondering how to ease the struggle –
Lays a soft tissue on the injured:
A blinding flash of pain – and then
Peace.
Hope you guys enjoyed that! This is only my 3rd piece of poetry on here (you can find my haiku attempt here and another abstract piece here) so tell me what you think, I do want to improve 🙂
Btw thank you guys for all the nominations for awards, I really appreciate them and I’m sorry they’re still not out yet, I’ve been so busy! I’ll get round to them, I promise.
Until then!
Daring To Jess 
Writing poetry is an act of courage.
Hope you’re ok over there and that all your friends and loved ones are safe and sound
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Thank you 🙂 I agree, pouring out your thoughts and feelings for the world to see is an act of courage! But killing others is an act of cowardice.
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Hope all ok over there. Pouring rain here this morning. Should be a good few days for the Bard and I. We saw a great tribute band on Saturday night. Great fun.
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👏👏glad you’re daring to write Poetry Jess (get it 😂😂) it’s nice
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Hahaha thanks man! Happy you enjoyed it 😉
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A short and wonderful poem!
Have you ever felt hopeless or low when hindrances ran into your path? Go through my inspirational poem “I Can Reach High” at
https://akashsingh2017.wordpress.com/2017/05/11/i-can-reach-high/
It’s a poem of Hope, strength and a never ending spirit to live Life.
Hope you will like it 🙂
Do leave your feedback, as it’s precious.
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A very nice and poem. I like that it doesn’t need to rhyme in order to assert itself. The rythym and narrative speak for themsleves as flowing and with a deep message as well. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you, your evaluative comment is really appreciated 🙂 thank you for reading!
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My pleasure, keep up the great posts!
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Enjoyed it, Jess.
Suffering should end swiftly and, hopefully, with little pain!
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Thank you, I agree! There is little else anyone can do…
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Jess, I’ve nominated your blog for the Mystery Blogger Award.
Do come take a look! 🙂
xoxoxo
https://abcofspiritalk.net/2017/06/09/mystery-blogger-award-thank-you-dear-kitty/
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Thank you so much! I’m very honoured 🙂
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Very nice, Jess. I enjoy reading it.
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Thank you, I’m so glad you enjoyed reading it 🙂
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I love this poem so much
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Thank you, that really means a lot to me!
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You’re welcome . I just have a strong feeling we’re going to be fast friends .lol
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I have no doubt about that 😉
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A beautiful, meaningful poem, expressing a real talent, a deep sensibility and a special kind of wisdom. It touched my heart…It’s wonderful to discover your blog,thank you for this opportunity! And thank you for following mine, I’m honored!
Blessings,
Claudia
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Thank you so much, I’m touched you think so! I really enjoy reading your pieces so it was my pleasure to discover yours 🙂
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Almost makes me feel bad for flies I kill.
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Ahaha yes it is a necessary evil 😉
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My friend Nathan jumps at flies whenever he sees them. It’s almost like poetry in motion…or a police chase.
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Must be quite dramatic 😂
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Like a lion chasing a gazelle
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SOUNDS GD 👌👌
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Never understood the expression: couldn’t kill a fly. Everyone does, even the gentlest of souls.
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Indeed, it is a sign of gentility to spare a suffering life…
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Very nice
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Thank you 🙂
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You write really well. Ur words are put together nicely. Keep it up. ❤
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I never really thought that my writing was very good but your kind words give me confidence 🙂 thank you!
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Don’t underestimate yourself. Your writting is really good.
https://poetricksblog.wordpress.com/2017/07/06/underestimating/?preview=true
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Thank you, that poem was what I needed!
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😊😊😊😊😊
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